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A piece of advice that I received from one of my peers who reviewed my analysis paper was to work on developing my details a bit more. I struggle with going into details with my writing, because I like to write papers that are very straight to the point. However, I also have troubles with sometimes developing my thoughts too much and end up having papers that are much to long. For me, finding the happy medium is always extremely difficult. I also took some time to improve my grammar mistakes in my paper as well as my word choice.